http://omega-13.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] omega-13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bolson 2006-07-28 06:32 pm (UTC)

Ouch. Decent as I found the overall writing, characters, story, etc. is/are/appropriate-verb-form-of-to-be, I'm not sure I could bring myself to read more of that, especially with so many other things in my reading PQueue.

I was hoping he'd kinda improved.

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